2005
10.04
10.04
Use what?
Remember the fight scene in the Bronze at the end of ‘The Harvest’? The part where Buffy jumps down from that walkway, lands on a pool table, does a forward flip (I think there’s another name for that…), grabbing a pool cue as she hits the floor and stakes a vampire seconds later?
I just couldn’t use it… it felt too much like stealing… it was too clever… and I don’t think Buffy, in this story, is quite confident enough in her abilities to pull it off yet. I would be too tempted to have her fall on her ass (slipping on a puddle of blood/beer).
And I’m once again having action-sequence issues… I’ve got how many fics or parts of fics stalled at the action sequence right now? At least 5. Maybe I just need to write a few short fics that are ONLY action to get over it?
I know how the rest of this fic will go… I just can’t seem to get it there right now…
